Wednesday, November 23, 2005

CoV - "Simultaneous Systems of Character Choice" @ Kill Ten Rats

I read a great article posted on the always-excellent Kill Ten Rats website regarding the CoV/CoH character generation process. It relates to my little rant about the same subject, although it boasts the character generation as a pure positive (and its a huge positive for this game; I just do not feel its full potential has been realised).

Friday, November 18, 2005

APC - The Fight Begins

I am rather excited about the Multiplayer Story-Telling RPG that I've been playing these past few months; its been a real freakin' blast to participate in. A Peaceful Country is now rolling along in Chapter 3, and the action is getting rather exciting. I'd read the story from the beginning if you are new to the storyline, but the action I am excited about starts right here with Oseon entering a pub named the Fat Tiger in search of the whereabouts of August Whyttel... unbeknownst to Oseon, August's in a bit of a snag.

We've got some great players getting involved, and the story is turning out to be a whole lot of fun; I hope we keep going and finish the overall story. I am so fascinated by the creativity of the story-tellers that are playing this game.

Friday, November 11, 2005

CoV: The Tedium Creating New Characters

I've been playing City of Villains now for a couple weeks, and I have to say, the game really is great. With the added models/skins/classes/etc they've provided, its even more fun to generate villains using the in-depth character creation tool. I've been really enjoying making new characters too; when I only have a short time to sit in front of the PC, instead of jumping in the game I fire up the character generator to see what I can create. It's a lot of fun to see if you can envision a persona and then create it.

However, there's something lacking in the game; creating new characters can become annoying after a while. Cryptic Studios ought to better use the addictiveness that their character generator feature offers.

Here's my biggest bone with playing with the character generator; you have to choose a name for the character before it is 'saved'. I understand that a character needs a name in order to be played... so why do I find this annoying? Well, I have to get to my other issue to better explain.

The other sore point is that you have to choose a server before you can start generating a new character. These two issues, to me, detract from the coolness and usefulness of the character generator. I really wish I could create endless numbers of characters and save them locally. If I chose to not use that character, ever, then it'd never need a name, would never need to be uploaded to Cryptic's servers for storage... it'd just be some art that I created on my home PC that I may or may not use at some later time as a played character.

As things stand right now, I already have more than half of my slots taken up for the server that my friends and I play on. The slots are getting filled with villains I've created but have not played... and I may never play them. That being said, they look cool enough I'd like to be able to keep them... somewhere.

I get really annoyed when I am put on the spot to think of a name; and since the names clash with both City of Villains and City of Heroes, sometimes it takes longer to come up with a cool name than it does to come up with a cool-looking character. You are forced to commit the design to a name right then and there, and if you can't come up with a cool name you've pretty much wasted your time because you do one of two things in this case; you either decide to not save the character, or you pick a name that your are less than satisfied with. In both cases, the chances of you playing the character is reduced to zero; I mean, who wants to play a character that has a crappy name?

If I were Cryptic, I'd change the to allow the players to generate as many characters they want; allow them to re-load them as they choose, modify them some more, maybe 'clone' a template to build off of to create permutations to see if you can create something that looks cooler than the current one and then compare them all side-by-side. Don't force them to choose a name, perhaps not even force them to choose an archetype.

When the player does decide on a server, then prompt them for archetype (usually the look helps dictate the archetype in my case... I often have to press the back-arrow to change the archetype, powers, etc after I've created the costume), then prompt them for a name. They might get more enjoyment from this simple change, and it might also increase the longevity of their subscription since they might be generating several non-played characters that they decide to move onto when they are getting bored / tired of their current main. Sometimes players just 'quit' when they get tired, but if they knew they had a cool looking hero/villain ... they just might fire the game up and commit the character to a server and give it a name.

I might even be tempted, as a company, to take things a step further. I might allow the user to pose the characters they make, perhaps even allow them to place the characters in pre-determined sets, and maybe even allow them to pose enemies to recreate battle scenes for cool screenshots. The sets don't need to be spoilers for in-game content either, you could make small simple sets from existing game architecture/art for the player to create a scene... I could imagine myself doing this for countless hours to be honest; screenshot-taking can be a whole lot of fun sometimes.

Anyways, that ends my little rant on CoV/CoH - both are fantastic games, I just wish they'd allow me to play with the character generator in a more free-form fashion because I find the character generation portion of the game a whole lot of fun.

Tuesday, November 08, 2005

A Peaceful Country: Short Stories

I've decided to re-publish the short stories I'd written for A Peaceful Country, an interactive storytelling/role-playing game that I've signed up for. I originally posted them in the Aggro Me Forums where the game is being hosted, but for archival purposes I wanted to also post them here.

apc short story: Just a Tree

Just a Tree

Today was the first day of autumn; a celebrated Holiday, a day off, even for the Whyttel family. Stewart woke August from his bed shortly into this first official day of autumn. He wanted to show his brother something he'd never shown anyone before.

"Come on!" whispered Stewart "I want to get back before mom and dad realize that we're gone!"

A ten-year-old August wrestled with his sweater, trying to get into it at the same time as he was putting on his boots.

"Meet me around back of the shop, I'll get dad's lantern and meet you there." Stewart climbed out of the window and jumped down to the grassy backyard.

---

The two boys worked their way through the forest; August followed his brother closely because his brother seemed to be trudging through the woods without direction.

"We're getting far from home, Stewart." August said with a shiver.

"We're almost there August; it's at the bottom of the grove over there."

August followed his brother's finger and saw nothing but more darkness.

They moved on, leaves crunching loudly underfoot. The route eventually turned into a downhill slope. As the two brothers worked their way downward the trees began to thin out. August could now make out the moon through the near-bare branches of the forest's canopy. Once they'd reached the bottom, Stewart did not need to say a single word… August knew what they stood before, and it was incredible.

"How did you find… is that? Stewart…" August was mesmerized.

"Pretty neat, hunh?" Stewart said in a moonlit-grin.

"Wow…" is all August could muster; it felt like he was in the presence of Lady Hylana herself.

"Touch it!" giggled Stewart "Go on… it's just a tree!"

August walked up to the tree and placed his hand palm-open on its trunk. He could feel a warmth coursing through the tree that made him pull his hand away reflexively. This was the largest tree August had ever seen, and exactly the way he had imagined it. The tree's trunk was easily the size of the bedroom he shared with his brother.

---

"You can't do that!" echoed August in the summer heat.

"Oh, come on… it's just a tree!" said Stewart playfully as he pulled at one of the smaller branches.

"Stewart, it's not funny… stop it n…"

*CRACK*

Stewart fell to the ground as the branch snapped. August rushed over to his brother, and his eyes opened wide when he saw what his brother had discovered; it was true.

Stewart laughed. "It does have gold in it!" he said, somewhat in disbelief.

"I told you it did, you didn't have to hurt it Stewart!"

Stewart went quiet. He gripped the branch tightly in his hands; he could hear something... singing?

"Did you hear that August?"

August stared at his brother; all he heard was the summer's breeze.

"Someone's coming! August… run!"

August didn't hesitate. He just picked a direction and ran. He ran up the slope and continued until his legs could no longer keep up the frantic pace. Then he stopped.

"Stewart?" he whispered under labored breath. He then tried his best to hold his breath, hoping to hear his brother's footsteps in the distance.

Nothing. Where did his brother go?

---

Stewart stood still, and watched his brother run away. He wanted to follow but he was paralyzed with fear.

The singing got louder, so loud he could no longer stand it. And then he saw a wispy cowled figure floating down into the grove. The figure approached him, stopping right in front of him. It reached up and pulled back its hood, it was angelic. It reached out and touched his shoulder.

Stewart went weak, dropping the branch.

The singing had stopped. The cowled figure was gone. Stewart just stood there, unsure as to what had just happened.

---

"Why do you keep going there?" August asked as he rubbed his eyes.

Stewart smiled broadly as he climbed into their bedroom through the window. It was still dark out, but he could make out the voices of his parents in the kitchen.

"August, look at this!"

Stewart handed August something wrapped in a supple leather cloth.

"What is it?" August asked.

"Just check it out!"

August opened the cloth, and held an extremely detailed carving of a cowled figure in his hands. He continued to examine the figurine; it had more detail in it than any piece he’d ever seen before.

"Where… where did you get this?”

"Get it? Well brother… would you believe that I made it?"

August smirked. "Sure you did. Where did you find…"

"I’m telling you August, I made it!”

August didn’t know what to think. His brother had never shown any interest in working with wood, ever. It was impossible that he had made this…

"You used majik!?" August said all too loudly.

The two of them went quiet. When the door to their room opened, it was flooded with by light from their father’s lamp.

Their father looked at the two of them, and focused on Stewart who still had his jacket on, not to mention his muddy boots. As his father walked towards Stewart, he reached out and grabbed the figurine from August’s hands with a quick swipe.

His father looked at the figurine briefly.

"Care to explain this, boys?" grumbled their father.

"I made it…" confessed Stewart.

"I know." James replied with disappointment in his voice. "Stewart, I’ve told you before – you should never combine majik and woodworking."

"What do you know, James?" Stewart scorned. "I made that tonight, in just a couple hours!”

"… and you’ll never do it again." James stared at Stewart with an intensity made August shudder. Their father slipped the figurine into his vest pocket and left their room, slamming the door behind him.

---

When August woke, he was cold and wet. He found himself lying on his back in a pool slushy snow at the bottom of the grove. He felt his face; it was scratched up from the branches whipping him in the face as he carelessly ran through the forest earlier that day.

August opened his eyes, and before him was the tree like he had never seen it before. Its entire trunk was ornately carved glyphs and symbols that were so intricate it boggled the mind.

As he sat up he realized he was clenching something in his right hand. He pulled his icy hand from the slush, and began to wipe off the mud and snow. August soon realized it was the same broken branch from when they were just kids, only now it too was as ornate as the tree in front of him.

“Oh Stewart!” exhaled August as he stood up in awe… and he began to cry for his dead brother.

APC Short Story: Repercussions

Repercussions

“Let me help you with that Kathy.” giggled Maggie to her sister-in-law.

Maggie put down her wine glass and walked across the room to help Kathleina with the last two buttons at the back of her evening gown. And she buttoned the last button Maggie peered over Kathleina’s shoulder and into the mirror, looking at their reflections. They two of them were wearing fancy white dresses, with lacy frills around their sleeve’s cuffs, the hem of their skirts, their waists, and around their necks. Kathleina’s face was painted a ghostly white.

Kathy grimaced at they way she looked, and stuck out her tongue.

Kathy laughed “I feel like I’m a little girl!”

“Quick, you have to paint my face before it is time to leave!”

Maggie sat down on the edge of her bed and closed her eyes. She scrunched up her face when she felt the cold wet brush touched her forehead.

“I haven’t dressed up like this for the festival since I got married!” Kathy said as she painted Maggie’s face. “We should do this every year.”

“The guys will think we’ve lost our minds Kathy! They might not even want to be near us at the dance, looking as crazy as us two... girls!”

“Stop talking! You are making the paint clump up… silly!”

“Mmm…mmmmm…”

“What is it?” Kathy jokingly scowled.

“My drink, I need my…”

“MAGGIE! … MAGGIE!” It was James’ booming voice from downstairs. It sounded urgent.

The two women grabbed the hem of their gowns and rushed out of the room. Maggie peered over the banister to see James smiling, leaning against the dining room table to help keep his intoxicated-self propped up.

“Maggie! Look who’s home for the festival!”

With surprise in her half-painted face, Maggie let go her glass; she leaned over the banister and watched the glass fall, smashing into splash of red on the floor below.

---

James slapped Stewart on the back.

“And then he walked into the foyer… that’s when Maggie, she, she dropped her glass of wine over the banister!”

The men around James all laughed aloud, looking over towards Maggie and Kathy in acknowledgment that they were laughing about her.

“She must be happy to have you home for the week, Stewart!” exclaimed an intoxicated Mr. Tytler.

“He’s always been her favorite!” laughed James, as he slapped Stewart on the back again.

“Say… how’s the training going? Have you met the King yet?” asked another drunken friend of his father’s.

“The training is good.” He replied curtly. “And the King’s too busy to meet with new recruits… besides, most of the greenhorns are… well, they’re gone by the end of the winter months.”

“He’s also working in the King’s stables! He’s going to..” boasted James, spilling ale as he dipped and swayed.

Stewart cut in “… No James, it’s not... It’s the Oxana Forest Rangers’ stables. They’ve asked me to help them out; it’s not even part of the curriculum.”

Stewart’s patience for his drunken entourage was thinning, and he scanned the room for anybody that was looking his way for an escape.

He saw his brother across the dance floor, pouring himself some punch with a ladle. When August turned, he froze at the sight of his brother in military dress.

Stewart was the only one in the room that was not wearing white at all. Minimally attendees wore a white paper top hat, which was given at the door to anyone that was not wearing the festival’s official dress code. Stewart was given exception because he was in military dress.

“Looking good!” August shouted over the music. Stewart simply smiled and motioned for August to follow him outside.

---

“How’s the shop doing?” Stewart asked.

“For the off season, not too bad really. We’re gearing up for a busy spring, once the snow melts.”

The two of them stood ankle-deep in the fresh fallen snow, staring at their feet.

“Did dad tell you he turned down Sir Marten’s final offer on the Steeplewood Manor contract?” asked August.

“Yeah, he mentioned something about it in the carriage-ride here.”

“Mom’s missed you. She cries a lot at night.”

“I know…” Stewart sighed. “But this is better for August. James may have been right about me… I’ve never had any interest in…”

“I know.” August didn’t want to hear his brother admit he was not interested in woodworking.

“What you don’t know, August… is that I’m not training to be a soldier.”

This caught August’s attention. “But… the uniform…”

“The uniform is the same for all new entrants to the military… but I’m not cut out to be a sword-toting foot soldier. I’m too... C’mon, you’re my brother; we both know I’m too lazy for that!”

“So… why don’t you come home?” August wondered aloud.

“August, they’re enrolling me in the School of Majiks. I’m to start apprenticing come spring. They… my superiors figured I’d better serve Windaria this way!”

August could not believe his ears. His brother was always interested in majik more than he, but the two of them always found time to pick up new tricks and practice them out in the forest, away from their parents. Stewart used to call upon winds to clear fallen leaves from the path during the fall months, would use the majik light small fires to warm their hands in the winter months. One day August suddenly found himself nearly knee-deep in mud in what had been but a shallow puddle just moments before. His brother used to mock their father at times too, bringing back carved objects that he had made from fallen branches; they’d resemble regular customers, or he’d carve animals in great detail. The intricate carvings would be so ornately detailed that it would infuriate their father because it was too detailed not to be done without majik.

“Does dad know?”

“No, and he never needs to know, August. I told you because I thought you would be happy for me.”

“I am!” beamed August.

---

Stewart lay in his cot in the Oxana barracks. He just couldn’t sleep. He kept going over his brief conversation with his brother during the winter festival’s ball not two weeks ago… He had only been living away from home for half the year, yet he felt a distance already growing between him and his family. He really wanted to tell them more, especially his mother… she’d likely understand.

Stewart pushed himself quietly out of bed and silently crossed the dorm floor, making sure not to wake any of the other fledgling recruits. He pushed the hallway curtains to the side and walked down the hall to the door leading outside; he really needed to relieve himself.

As he was pissing in the snow outside the barracks, he closed his eyes and shivered. Damn it was cold out. Suddenly there was a hand that grabbed him by the forehead and pulled him backwards, stopping suddenly as he stepped into his assailant whom was holding him very closely.

“It sucks to be you, soldier!” is the last thing he heard before he felt a knife’s blade press against his throat.

---

“JAMES! … JAMES!” Maggie was at the top of the stairs that looked over the backyard and into the side of the workshop.

James lifted his head and eyed her quizzically from across the yard.

“IT’S TIME FOR SUPPER, JAMES!”

James nodded and waved to her. He’d be in soon.

---

James entered the house about a half hour after Maggie had expected him, but the look on her poor husbands face and the well decorated officers that she could see in the backyard was more than enough indication that her husband had more than a good reason for his tardiness.

“Margaret, Dear Margaret… I’m sorry.” James looked at her pitifully from across the kitchen standing in the opened doorway.

“Stewart?” she whispered.

James could no longer look at her in the eye. He signed his eldest up for the military. He was to blame.

“My Stewart?” she whimpered.

August was sitting at the table, and James saw tears begin to well up in his son’s eyes. As he stepped forward, August sat up so suddenly his chair fell backwards behind him. August clenched his teeth, slammed his fist into the table, and then turned to run to through the kitchen, straight through the foyer, and out the front door.

APC Short Story: Tough Decisions

Tough Decisions

To James Whyttel, of the Whyttel Woodworking Company,

With the passing of his father, Sir Marten has commissioned that the Steeplewood Manor Estate be updated with modern décor and styling. I am proud to inform you that Sir Marten desires your family’s services for the upcoming stages of renovations to his Manor.

Your family’s history of expertise in woodworking for the past 25 generations is well known across all of Windaria, and is even heard of in all lands of Aeralon. Furthermore, being a local Steeplewood success, the Whyttel Woodworking Company is the obvious choice for such an ambitious and prestigious project.

It is for this reason that he has chosen your family business over all Windarian competition. He has requested the Whyttel Family be the sole company contracted to oversee the renovations of his Manor. Construction will begin this coming spring, and will continue for the foreseeable future. For this reason, Sir Marten is recommending that the entirety of the Whyttel Woodworking Company’s resources be focused on the Marten Manor renovations for the duration of the project.

Sir Marten patiently awaits your response to his kind offer.

- Squire Guydion


James had read this letter countless times this past week; it still made his blood boil.

Tobias broke the silence “We made the right decision James. We can’t just stop serving our customer because of…”

“… I know Toby, I know.” answered James.

James crumpled the note with one fist, and dropped it to the floor.

“Let’s walk.” sighed James.

The two men exited the workshop, and James locked the doors behind him. The air was crisp and the grassy yard was shimmering underneath an unobstructed moon.

Toby drew his wool coat over his shoulders. “I expect this years’ early frost will upset the field workers...” exhaled Toby with icy breath.

“I imagine it will.”

With the conversation going nowhere, the two men walked down the trail towards the road out front of James’ house in silence. When they reached the road James noticed that his bedroom lamp was still on. He could make out Maggie sitting up waiting, despite the late hour.

“Heard from Stewart yet?” Tobias asked, drawing James’ stare away from his bedroom light.

“No. Not yet.” He started walking again “He’ll be better off though… he needs to learn some discipline and respect.” he replied, although Tobias had not asked.

“He’s good with horses; he’ll do well for himself in the King’s military, James. Heck, he may one day ride with the King’s Color Guard!”

“… he was happy to leave, Toby.”

James’ eyes blurred the shimmering moon light, and his used his sleeve to dry his face.

“Please, let’s just walk tonight….”

APC Short Story: Mr. Tytler's Order

Mr. Tytler's Order

Stewart pulled his blankets up and over his head to block the mid-morning sun. His arm then crept out of the sheets and searched his bedside table for his spectacles. When he did not find them, he sighed heavily and rolled over.

His father was standing over him, his hands clasped behind his back. Startled, Stewart groaned “Yes James?” He always used his father’s first name to address him.

His father simply said “Time’s passing you by Stewart…” and handed Stewart his spectacles. Stewart placed them above his nose and let his eyes adjust as he watched his father, James, leave his room.

Stewart looked towards the sun and grumbled to himself. He got out of bed and went to the window that was letting in the light. He looked out the window towards the woodshop across the yard. His younger brother was already out there with uncle Toby, working on the lathe again today.

He reached out to the window’s pull and closed the window tight. He then drew his thick curtains closed to return his room to the darkness he preferred.

“No use going back to bed…” he thought aloud.

---

With warm tea in hand and looking a little bedraggled, Stewart made his was down the steps into the backyard. Across the way he saw his brother still working away on the lathe. His brother was only 16 and was turning out to be a natural woodworker. The whole family was rather proud of his improving skills, especially at his young age.

He stopped at the fence that surrounded the workshop and placed his tea on a fence post. He looked down the customer pathway leading up to the shop and saw Mr. Tytler tying up his horse-drawn wagon. He worked his way down the pathway to greet Mr. Tytler.

He reached out and slapped the horse’s neck firmly. “Good morning Candy!” he said with a smile.

“Hello Stewart” replied Mr. Tytler.

“Good morning Sir. She’s feeling better, is she Sir? Her leg looks great!”

“Candy has recovered remarkably, Stewart. I thank you for all your help with her.” Mr. Tytler said as he reached for his coat.

“She sure has grown since I saw her last fall.”

“Indeed, she’s soon ready for the market now. Once her leg’s at full strength I hope she’ll get me enough coin to finish the house.”

“You’re selling her!?” blurted Stewart.

“Well, yes. Yes. Well… I intend to.”

“But she’s so beautiful…”

“… and she’ll be worth a lot!” Mr. Tytler cut in. “Is your father in?”

“Yeah. James is in the shop. I believe your order is ready, too.”

“It is, I got word last night it was ready for me to pick it up… ah there he is.” he said as he waived to Stewart’s father.

---

“That’ll be 137 and 15, Sir.” yawned Stewart.

“Mr. Tytler, it’ll be 135”, came James’ voice from the back room.

As James turned the corner, he chuckled “Stewart, we want our customers to keep coming back…”

“No worries, Mr. Whyttel, its well worth the going price.” smiled Mr. Tytler. “And I’ll be coming back with another order by mid-summer if the market treats me well.”

“Sounds good, we’ll hope to see you then. Good luck this summer!”

Stewart followed Mr. Tytler as he headed down the pathway towards his cart. Stewart’s brother was already helping their two uncles load the wagon with Mr. Tytler’s furniture order.

“Good day Stewart!”

“Hey August… saw you on the lathe again this morning.” Stewart replied as he handed August a chair.

“Yeah, it’s easier than I expected... and today I learned that the cutting blades are sharp!” August giggled mockingly as he pointed to uncle Toby’s bandaged left hand.

Stewart whistled and laughed. “Nice work there Tobias!”

“It’s not the last time he’ll cut himself, guys… guaranteed!” chimed in their uncle Terry.

The four of them continued to crack jokes at each other as James Whyttel watched them load up the wagon with Mr. Tytler’s order. As he stood on the house’s front porch, he took a drag of his lit pipe. “I’m not going to be Mr. Popular after this season Maggie.” he said to his wife, clenching his pipe between his teeth.

“I’m sure Stewart will understand, James. He’s never been interested in learning anyway. He’ll likely be relieved.” Margaret replied through the window.

James turned and entered the house. “But the business has always gone to the eldest Maggie…I just wish I’d paid more attention to him when he was younger…”

“James, he’s a young man now. He’s not a child. He’ll understand, I promise.”

“He always insists on taking the shortcut, whenever he can, Maggie.” he said, speaking over Maggie’s consoling voice. “For the Love of the Lady, I caught him just last night using majik to engrave Mr. Tytler’s furniture! You’d think he’d know by now that we Whyttel’s do not mix our crafts. When we work the wood, we treat it as the pure art form that it is! He knows better than to use majik when he’s working the wood, Maggie!”

“We’re still a little irate, are we James?” shot Stewart as he walked through the front door. “Mom’s told you before, your voice carries…”

Stewart walked straight through the foyer, through the kitchen, and went right out the back door.

“You’d think you would have figured that out by now, old man!” he blurted before the door slammed.

Thursday, November 03, 2005

CoV: Having More Fun as a Villain

I bought City of Villains on Tuesday, and I must say it is fantastic. With the release of CoV, even the owners of City of Heroes get the graphics engine upgrade - they get better textures, cool new effects, and other great things like ragdoll effects for the fallen. The game looks even better than it did, and it started out looking fantastic to start with!

So, as per usual, I have no idea what class to play - I am working on it though, so far I have 2 characters I'm messing with, but like I did with Heroes, I'll likely make more before I'm satisfied.

We're playing on the Justice server for CoV, and on Guardian for CoH... not sure why we moved to another server, but I'm guessing they (my guildies and co-workers) wanted more character slots for their Baddies.

A Peaceful Country - Chapters 1, 2 and 3

Our interactive story named A Peaceful Country is now in its third chapter. We completed Chapter 2 not long ago, and now we're in Chapter 3. We're picking up a few new characters / players this chapter too, which is truely excellent. The more we have contributing to the overall story, the better. We can split up now and then and work on side-events, all kinds of fun stuff.

This chapter ought to prove interesting too - it looks like Jay (played by Anskiere) and August (played by myself) are about to get themselves into a little bit of trouble... in fact, August is already in more trouble than he realises.